Jill
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Poem...Hey all,
I came across my book of writings yesterday and found this poem that I had written. It is hard for me to read because I remember writing it and all of the pain.. and you know.
I can sense him coming, miles away
Nowhere to run, nowhere to hude, no way to get away
I shrink back in terror, hunch up in fear
He gets closer and closer, now very near
Brown hair coats his back, his eyes are so red
His teeth are all rotten, he smells of the dead
A dagger like nail goes into my eye
I yelp in pain, beg to die.
Within moments, I am drug into his lair
All I can think of us the pain, this is so unfair
I am chained to him, I cannot move an inch
And everytime he looks at me, I cannot help but flinch
He turns on some loud music, the noise makes me scream
He won't let me sit down, won't let me lie down, is this all a bad dream?
We dance and we dance. the beat going more fast and more painful
Can I survive this, I am so doubtful
The tears pour down my face, the pain is so much to bear
I yell for him to stop, I try to fight, to beg but he doesn't care
He laughs at my pain as he inflicts some more, to him this is all a game
All I can think is how stupid I am, how I must be lame
Then the music slows, the beast begins to let go, he has had his fun
I want to collapse for I am so tired but I know I must run
And it is over, until the next dance begins as I know it will, call it fate
So now I just wait.
It is not the best but there it is... Thanks for letting me share it.
Jill
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Ike
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Wow, that hits you in the face like a sledge hammer !
It's like reading a book from last night or any night the thoughts that you go through. Im so sorry you have to go through this too.... Im glad you wrote this i ''like'' It if like is the word.. It's powerful and to the point thank you for posting this. If it's ok with you i might use this somewhere on the site ?
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Sherri
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I think it''s amazing. Powerful. Heartbreaking...I was feeling that the entire way :smt022
Truly amazing...
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phil h
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Awesome . I loved it ! The poem , not the pain we all identified with . Keep writing girl , you expressed our lives !  
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